Hi I was wondering if you guys would be able to proofread my conclusion for my research paper regarding the pros

Question

Hi, I was wondering if you guys would be able to proofread my conclusion for my research paper, regarding the pros

and cons of modern technology and its modern technological devices . Within my conclsuion I have to integrate how my fields of study (communication and sociology) relate to my product study, which I am having trouble with finalizing so I’d highly appreciate if you can help me proofread it.

Conclusion:

In comparison to my concentrations of communication and sociology, they both play a huge part in these innovations that have been made through the usage of modern technology and its new age devices. According to the Merriam-Webster dictionary, sociology is described as
Communications